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empty poem by the-psycrothic empty poem by the-psycrothic
the road i walk is empty
the love i found is fake
where will i go
to find the rainbow
because
the sun is going down . . .
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Daily Deviation

Given 2012-03-05
:iconthemadartlover:
TheMadArtLover Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Writer
Beautiful. ^-^ Nicely written, and I love the picture that goes with it.
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:iconmonstermanga1022:
monstermanga1022 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist

the game of love be painful

tis filled with many tears

when playing the game be careful

it's going to take many years

:)

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:iconneon-thenoble1:
neon-thenoble1 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
beautiful man, i used it here: www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbi…
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Beautiful photo.
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:iconyefta03:
yefta03 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awas gan itu jalan tol!!!!
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:iconkoyukionna:
Koyukionna Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013   Artisan Crafter
Lovely, and a bit heart-wrenching (not sure why, maybe the solitude and location).
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:iconthe-psycrothic:
the-psycrothic Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Professional Photographer
maybe :p
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:iconarchon89:
Archon89 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
It's a beautiful photo... I don't know exactly why, but it is kinda inspiring! :)
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:iconthe-psycrothic:
the-psycrothic Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Professional Photographer
thank you :)
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:iconcaughtinchains:
CaughtinChains Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
How heart breaking.
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:iconselimeia:
Selimeia Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful. The title just as much as the shot. It all fits. I'm amazed.
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:iconthe-psycrothic:
the-psycrothic Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you so much :)
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:iconselimeia:
Selimeia Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Always a pleasure ;)
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:iconneko-kiba-kun:
Neko-Kiba-kun Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012   Photographer
Great shot, I just wonder it perhaps would been better without her beautiful smile :)
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:iconbi22:
Bi22 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful!:heart:
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:iconthe-psycrothic:
the-psycrothic Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you so much for the critiques and comments :)
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:iconthelighthousekeeper:
thelighthousekeeper Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012
Really original, amazing and lovely work. :heart:
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:icondreamofparadise:
dreamofparadise Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful picture !;)
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:iconwmthomas:
WmThomas Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
This is really cool. Congrats on the DD!
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:iconkayjensen:
kayjensen Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
beautiful...!!! congrats
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:iconreygarfaust:
ReygarFaust Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
Wonderful work! I love you!
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:iconannabelle278:
Annabelle278 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Student Artist
like this pic
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:iconkalou83:
kalou83 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
beutyfull work and gallery !!!
@+++
pascal
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:iconkoffeinik:
Koffeinik Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
I like this big heart,which she have^_^And the road,big road,going somewhere...
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:icontealzeh:
Tealzeh Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
loving this! beautiful!
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:iconshawnhenry:
ShawnHenry Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
like this photo very much.
...."And the road to my heart is full of potholes."
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:iconval-faustino:
Val-Faustino Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing work :clap:
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:iconego-01:
Ego-01 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
<3
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:icondogzbestfriend:
dogzbestfriend Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh, wow, so conceptual!! ^^
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:iconuberantakan:
uberantakan Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wih keren...!!!!
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:iconjaraguillo:
jaraguillo Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ESPECTACULAR!!!
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:iconmanenky:
manenky Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
parah ini kan jalan tol arah ancol kok bisa sihh kerennnnn cool man<3
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:iconra1ndanc3r:
Ra1nDanc3r Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Photographer
I like the poem, and I like the photo. But it doesn't really strike me as a Daily Deviation. It needs that extra... something
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darth-gerko Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Professional General Artist
I'm agree... and what's wiht the deviantArt staff???... most of the times they put a really good reason of why the picture deserves a dD... this time there's no explanation.

If this is a dD, I want mine too.
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:iconmiwaakai:
MiwaAkai Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
i coudlnt agree more. it lacks that WOW that DD's should have.
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:iconmeebub:
meebub Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i feel like a old or broken down building would suit it in the background. or like the sun setting in the background to go with the poem. Or maybe a heart that wasnt' a balloon maybe like a sculpture er somthing. But the weird thing is i looked at this when i was listening to mad world alex parks version... o,o
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:iconmiwaakai:
MiwaAkai Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
i agree its too simple, to easy to re create. if the backgroudn where more intriquite it'd be more beautiful, but thats just my opinion i suppose.
aha really? thats kinda funny.
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GoneKrazy Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like its simplicity. It makes it feel like it's from their heart. (no pun intended)
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:iconmiwaakai:
MiwaAkai Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
well its not that i dont like it, its that its a little too common for me. sure its all pretty and its cute but its not wow, for me its a bit passable. then again thats just me.
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:iconthe-psycrothic:
the-psycrothic Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Photographer
thanks for your critiques , i'll make more better images next time :)
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:iconkartiksharma:
kartiksharma Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student General Artist
The poem truly merges with the art ♥
I hope everything goes well with you and I hope it is soon :) ♥ ♥
But you are really a great poet :)
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georgeio-joe Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
i really like this it looks soooooooooooooooooooo good
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:iconmirraanduhh:
Mirraanduhh Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Artist
<3
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:iconmistaseth:
MistaSeth Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Filmographer
i love the sky
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smsrzlptr Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
nice pict and good poem
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:iconmikufan84:
Mikufan84 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
Great piece!It says alot without saying too much at the same time
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:iconunonuarts:
unonuarts Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
Generally great composition, but her smile doesn't do it. I'd hope for a frown or "bland" expression considering the saturation and level of contrast.
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joykiller5 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha that or really drippy eye makeup.
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:iconbatuxa:
Batuxa Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012   Filmographer
What... a... pretty shot!!! :D
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:iconw8ing4emolove:
w8ing4emolove Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
EPIC ALBUM COVER.
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